Should I, Should I not?

I was a tad hesitant. What would people say? That cute girl over there, what would she think? That guy sitting on the bench, didn’t he work on the same floor as me?

I took a tentative step, and the first few drops washed away my hesitation. I stepped out, got drenched, and felt freed.

Waiting for the rains to make an appearance at Hyderabad. Even though I am not a rain lover – I hate being outside when it is raining – I’ve had enough of the summer.


11 Responses to “Should I, Should I not?”

  1. 1 obelix June 30, 2009 at 2:02 pm

    the last two words ruined it.

  2. 2 manuscrypts June 30, 2009 at 3:05 pm

    very nice!! also liked the way you give context.. it complements.. 🙂

  3. 3 mythalez June 30, 2009 at 3:18 pm

    u should .. always should 😛

  4. 4 Sangfroid June 30, 2009 at 3:47 pm

    Lovely!! And I thought … 🙂

  5. 5 Divyendu June 30, 2009 at 7:11 pm

    I initially thought it was about the cute girl 😉

    good one 🙂

  6. 6 Winnie the Poohi June 30, 2009 at 8:58 pm

    I agree with Sangfroid.. and I thought… 😉

  7. 7 Kunal July 1, 2009 at 11:59 am

    obelix, hmmm… were you expecting something else, or just did not appreciate me comparing getting drenched with feeling free?

    manuscrypts, thanks! I started writing about rains, and it metamorphosed into a 55 🙂 I had to complement the 55 with what I was thinking.

    Rama, aye aye sir! 😀 .. seems you have experience…

  8. 8 Kunal July 1, 2009 at 11:59 am

    Sangfroid, what did you think? after reading your comment, I can think scores of more things that one can think of 🙂

    Divyendu, thanks 🙂

    Winnie, 🙂 now the number of possible meanings to what I wrote has doubled 😛

  9. 9 christ July 3, 2009 at 2:18 pm

    Loved this one.

  10. 10 makrand13 July 17, 2009 at 12:38 pm

    very nice 🙂

  11. 11 Kunal July 20, 2009 at 4:31 pm

    Christ, Makrand, thanks 🙂

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