Helping Hand

The addiction with 55 continues…

Raj was the go-to man for Alka. Sitting on the rooftop she said, “I’ve to tell you something”

Raj’s heartbeat quickened, “Has she finally understood my feelings?”

“I’ve been seeing Kapil for five months… I need your help in taking the plunge”.

Raj acquiesced, took her words to heart, and pushed her off the ledge.


18 Responses to “Helping Hand”

  1. 1 ~nm March 17, 2009 at 12:04 pm

    A death hand instead…

  2. 5 mythalez March 17, 2009 at 2:24 pm

    rofl rofl !!
    I like the ending 😀

  3. 6 @nks March 17, 2009 at 2:26 pm

    that was extreme !!

  4. 7 Perx March 17, 2009 at 3:01 pm

    That was fcuking awesome!

  5. 8 Arun March 17, 2009 at 3:08 pm

    great stuff

  6. 9 Sangfroid March 17, 2009 at 5:47 pm

    Nice!! Guess one would take the ‘plunge’ oneself before such a helping hand comes into play 😛

  7. 10 manuscrypts March 17, 2009 at 6:59 pm

    haha… good, finally Raj becomes pushy 🙂
    good stuff, keep the addiction going 😀

  8. 11 Chittaranjan March 17, 2009 at 11:05 pm

    Ehhhhe…..nice, but sadistic ending!!! Agar tum meri nahin hos akti, toh kisiki nahin hosakti 👿

  9. 13 Alosh March 18, 2009 at 12:33 pm

    good one!! keep them coming (after all its 55 words 😉 )

  10. 14 Kunal March 18, 2009 at 5:12 pm

    ~nm, indeed…

    Obelix, Kulbir, Sanrag, thanks guys 🙂

    Perx, Arun, Karan, thanks 🙂

  11. 15 Kunal March 18, 2009 at 5:12 pm

    Rama, you sound sadistic!

    @nks, it was, but inspired by real life incidents we frequently keep reading in newspapers.

    Sangfroid, yup.. everybody should avoid such “helping hands”

  12. 16 Kunal March 18, 2009 at 5:12 pm

    manuscrypts, great word play.. Raj did get pushy 🙂

    Chittaranjan, it _is_ sadistic, but as I said earlier, this is inspired by multiple real life incidents 😦

    Alosh, I’ll keep them coming.. best past about 55 is that it takes hardly 2-3 minutes to pen down anything once the thought strikes 🙂

  13. 17 Chittaranjan March 18, 2009 at 11:29 pm

    “this is inspired by multiple real life incidents”

    Don’t tell me you er..umm…lent the ‘helping hand’ to someone taking the plunge in the past 😐

  14. 18 Kunal March 19, 2009 at 10:22 am

    Chittaranjan, nah dude.. I am not that sadistic.. I am talking about similar incidents that keep popping up in the newspapers frequently.. with headlines similar to “disgruntled lover kills girl and ends own life” … you will find multiple variations to it in the newspaper.

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