Adah, we meet again!

There was no doubt, it was Adah. I could have recognized her anywhere, anytime even after all those years, having spent all three years of my B.Com pining for her. Rather than putting on weight as most of our batchmates had done, she had lost few kgs and was actually looking sexier. I had always thought that if I ever met her again, I would be too embarrassed, and would not be able to even open my mouth. Surprising myself, I called out, “Adah!”, and was chatting away as if we were the best of friends when we had last met rather than I was trying to hide from her having said a bit too much at our farewell.

Seeing no ring on her finger, I had to get the most important question out of the way right away, “Are you single?”

A forlorn smile played on her lips, “Single, never married, heart-broken twice.”

“I never thought beautiful girls like you ever got heart-broken, it was always us the guys that would be left heart-broken”, I said going in flashback mode.

“You could just say I’ve been unlucky in love”
, she replied.

I remembered the college days, Till the time I knew of you, I can say you have been unlucky. Being proposed by me almost every year, how many times did I propose to you, thrice?”

“Actually it was four times, I think you would not remember our farewell night. You were completely sloshed, and opened up your heart to me. I don’t think anybody has ever talked to me that way since then.”
, she replied.

“Hmmm, I have faint recollections of that night, although I have no memory of being rejected the fourth time by you. The other three rejections were etched deep in my heart and it took some time for me to pry them off.”
, I tried hard to remember that night.

She hesitated, “Maybe.. Nah, let it go”

I insisted, “Come on, you can say whatever is on your mind. It has been ages since that episode!”

“Maybe… Maybe, the reason you do not remember the rejection was that I never rejected you the fourth time, I sat silent and did not say anything. I did not know what to say.”
, she confessed.

I was stunned, “Why did you not say anything that time?”

“I just did not know what to say.”
, she said.

I fired an arrow in the dark, “I know why you did not say anything, you were too ashamed to be seen with me. I was not the cool guy like the studs of our batch, I was but a geek who used to spend his spare time in the library. You had a reputation to maintain, and you maintained it. Ain’t I right?”.

Silent yet again, she nodded. After all those years, finally I had a confirmation of why I was rejected throughout my college life.

Now she shocked me, “I think the fifth time, I would say Yes”. There was pleading sound in what she said.

I answered, “Thanks for rejecting me in college, else I would have never realized that beauty is indeed skin deep and people who truly love each other always look beyond that. I now value my wife even more than I used to. You see I’ve been happily married for 4 years now.”

26 Responses to “Adah, we meet again!”


  1. 1 sanyam May 15, 2009 at 4:22 pm

    nice work dude !!!

  2. 2 Sumati May 15, 2009 at 4:34 pm

    Beautiful Ending….

  3. 3 christ May 15, 2009 at 5:19 pm

    Amazing turn in the end. Didn’t expect it. Nice story :)

  4. 4 NoName May 15, 2009 at 5:20 pm

    Nice… Very Nice… :)

  5. 5 Divyendu May 15, 2009 at 6:33 pm

    wonderfully written mate! liked the end…

  6. 6 Meghna May 15, 2009 at 10:19 pm

    Beautiful story :)

  7. 7 Chittaranjan May 15, 2009 at 11:17 pm

    :oops: Gotta-read-tags-first!

    Nice one….

    BTW, wasn’t the 1920 movie heroine called Adah?

  8. 8 @nks May 16, 2009 at 7:52 pm

    now that’s wht I call non cliche …. awsume

  9. 9 manoz May 18, 2009 at 7:03 am

    can i copy your work??? i loved it. very simple but evenly decoreted with cuteness

  10. 10 bondbhai May 18, 2009 at 9:55 am

    You should consider writing as a career :)

  11. 11 Sangfroid May 18, 2009 at 6:02 pm

    ‘Adah’ is a sweet name. Good Choice :-P

    The ending was superb! Great Work!

  12. 12 Kunal May 18, 2009 at 6:56 pm

    Sanyam, thanks dude :)

    Sumati, the ending is the reason I’ve tagged this is “Not my best effort”. I feel it should have been tighter, with much less words used :)

    christ, NoName: thanks :)

  13. 13 Kunal May 18, 2009 at 6:57 pm

    Divyendu, Meghna: thanks :)

    Chittaranjan, I vaguely remembered hearing that name somewhere. Now I know where I heard it! Thanks :) Anyway the name of the heroine is “Adah Sharma” and she sure looks good :)

    @nks, thanks!

  14. 14 Kunal May 18, 2009 at 6:57 pm

    manoz, I know imitation is the best form of flattery, but please do not copy my work. If you want to use it somewhere, contact me at kunalblogs[at]gmail.com, and we can discuss it further.

    bondbhai, I still don’t feel I am good enough for that! :)

    Sangfroid, even I liked the name :) and thanks dude!

  15. 15 Pallav May 18, 2009 at 10:40 pm

    Nice work! And I am glad you said ‘three years of B.Com’ and not ‘four years of engineering’. Although three fourths of the way through the story, I knew what the ending was going to be. I guess I have the advantage of knowing you better than most!

  16. 16 manoz May 19, 2009 at 1:29 am

    kunal..i will like to post this content with ur patent and ur weblink. is it ok??

  17. 17 Aniket May 19, 2009 at 10:36 am

    Pure pleasure. I hope this is how my stories make people feel…

  18. 18 shaheda May 19, 2009 at 4:07 pm

    well said, good read!

  19. 19 manoz May 21, 2009 at 11:20 am

    no response???

  20. 20 mythalez May 21, 2009 at 1:21 pm

    woo woo … Adah had shown too much ada back then eh? :P

    btw, coming to the name, ‘naam ada likhna’ is like one of my fav songs :P and the heroine in that movie is called Ada too …

  21. 21 Kunal May 21, 2009 at 6:41 pm

    manoz, I still say you cannot copy my story. If you want to, you can post a paragraph or two, but not the whole blog-post and you have to attribute it to me. But, I repeat, you cannot copy the whole post.

  22. 22 Kunal May 21, 2009 at 6:41 pm

    Bhai, you do have that advantage :)

    Aniket, thanks man! There is but one problem with your stories, that you have stopped writing them :) else they are really good!

    shaheda, thanks!

    Rama, rofl :D .. and yeah even I really like that song, used to listen to it non-stop, have not listened to it for some time now. Will hunt for it, and listen to it again :)

  23. 23 Chittaranjan May 21, 2009 at 11:54 pm

    @Mythalez: Thanks a ton d00d…… I had a bee-in-my-bonnet abt where I’d heard that name b4 on the telly….and you gave the hint: ‘Mini’ssha Lamba in Yahaan!!!

    Tx.

  24. 24 vrikmace July 21, 2009 at 12:42 am

    Lovely. It is too good… wow.

  25. 25 Ajay October 14, 2009 at 7:54 am

    Aww heart breaker at the end man! But very nice…

  26. 26 ha ha ha!!! LOL!! November 26, 2009 at 4:09 am

    So you think you could write? I wasted 5 precious minutes of my Life!


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